YandereSyco

Hello, this is the author of Spirit Serpent Art: The Journey To Divinity. I hope you will support my novel in WSA 2025 by voting power stones and leaving reviews. Thank you!

The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.

Only shooting stars break the mold

The crying of a child who has just been born in this world for some reason has made the most powerful People of that time apprehensive and not only in the land of Naruto throughout the multiverse, powerful beings have felt apprehensive was like a king had been born and said hello to their futures subjects.

"Oh them, I don't think they even kissed yet, or even hold hands."

What she meant by "Us" is the other heroic spirits just like her.

"I'm dead,"

Every living being affected by that light, whether human or animal (except for plants and even simpler organisms) his eyes changed, showing the Rinnegan shape of Madara (Which doesn't make much sense, since this Genjutsu was released with the Rinne Sharingan, it should be the Rinne Sharingan)